Focused on my lighting and depth. I have to improve.
Didn't bother adding any effects except for the stars.
http://i52.tinypic.com/1zf0k11.jpg
CnC Please. :)
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Focused on my lighting and depth. I have to improve.
Didn't bother adding any effects except for the stars.
http://i52.tinypic.com/1zf0k11.jpg
CnC Please. :)
Improve your lighting by balancing out your contrast.
Try not to have lighting coming from directly the side. Try getting it from a higher angle.
Play around with curves + the brightness & contrast adjustment.
Burn/dodge areas to help out your lighting.
Depth could be brought out by focusing your major FX on the focal.
Placing FX on the focal in certain areas usually helps bring focus.
Drop the border and if you're going for text, add more to it and make it most interesting.
Try subtext, possible logos, clipping masks, etc.
Keep it up.
i agree with dero the light is good but it would probably look way better from a higher angle
The wings look sort of flat to me. I think that the whole signature would look better without them. I think that you should focus the smudging on what he is wearing because it is filled with really nice colors. The text is a bit of a downer but it is not that bad. I suggest erasing the border because it really doesn't look good with this specific signature, it kills it really. The effects on the right look nice. Kiu meng.
