Lumber

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Anyone :O

the b&w ones got a nice feel to it :)

Thank you :) I like that version better as well.

This is by far the best from you!I really like it!
KIU!

b&w is better.
The first one is overcontrasted and the colour doesn't look very good.
I think you need to work on your c4d placement a bit. Over in that left corner it doesn't look to appealing to me. I think it would look much better with the c4ds on the right hand side more would look better. That soft brush that you put on his neck looks kind of weird too tbh. Better to maybe go behind the render or just get rid of it.

I can see improvement from you though,
KIU

OK thanks.