V1 http://i56.tinypic.com/inbwjp.jpg
V2 http://i51.tinypic.com/nmkhef.jpg
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I like the first one a lot, but the second one seems overlighted and the text takes away too much attention. I think its good. KIU
thnx - for some reason V2 does appear to be lighting more , and its crazy cuz all did was change the border - idk :D
V2
To bright on some places,I like the c4d play and the frame.
The c4d is very chaotic, try to get a certain flow with your c4d's because at the moment it is very messy. I think you should get rid of the borders and text =p
^agree on this one
this one lacks composition