B&W Tag CnC and rating

Okay, so this is my first B&W tag i think, i used one fractal, one C4d(that i made :D) and one render, tell me what you think :D
http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a...Alchemist2.png
V2
http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a...Alchemist3.png
If you want C4d, you can find it here - First Abstract C4d by ~ShaionM on deviantART

its mostly over blurred

Alright, i dont think that it is overblurred, i had to burn part of it, and it looks blurred because of it. Thanks though :D

it looks like you made it like a normal tag and just desaturated it :/

also yeah.. it's out of focus in the wrong areas

I'm all for the washed out looking tag, but I think a bit more depth could be added here. I noticed you said you were burning. I think you should burn some of the darker shadows more.

By darker shadows, do you mean the shadows on the focal, or on the c4ds/effects?

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Originally Posted by Kinetics

By darker shadows, do you mean the shadows on the focal, or on the c4ds/effects?

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Both, but mostly on the c4ds and effects.

Whenever i do that though, they just seem to get blurry, not darker. . .any tips for a noob?

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Originally Posted by Kinetics

Whenever i do that though, they just seem to get blurry, not darker. . .any tips for a noob?

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Do you have it set to midtones or shadows? Switch to shadows for the darker colors if you haven't already. I think that might fix your problem.

Worst case scenario you could always just apply the image and sharpen it after your done if it comes out too blurry.

Alright thanks :D