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I can't decide whether I like this or not tbh. It's very sharp around your focal and the blending isn't particularly effective either. Depth and lighting aren't bad but you need to focus on your flow which I suggest you should add some effects in to create.
Overall I don't think it's bad but there's plenty room for improvements. I don't mean to be harsh so keep trying!
Same thing as Shorter :D
The left side of the tag past the gun is good in terms of coloring and whatnot.. You could easily rework into something really good. area around the stock is too sharp where it's interrupting the coloration.
