Point

Pshht shit title I know but she's pointing so meh

Anyway trying out this style again
Threw in a splatter because I'm a bad ass ;)

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...ns-d3gmcf3.png

CnC please?
Personally I think the lighting needs work. Was trying to get a nice mix of darkness and light but think I messed up a bit :l

the soft brushing looks bad tbh
and i hate symmetry tags but thats just me ><
its not bad just work on light

White period blood coming out of her armpits? I like it.

Took me a while to notice the render, might wanna brighten it up a bit. Other than that, I like it. kiu

Hmm this one looks kinda empty even though you have 2 focals :/
I would try to add more atmosphere to it and watch the flow :D

I kinda like it, but the lines going vertical in the center throw off your flow a lot. So maybe get rid of those or atleast rotate them. kiu

they said the most, now heres my cnc, the 2 renders arent placed good, one is a little too high and going too the right much more than it should.