2 tags.

Newest:

http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...sey/Osiris.png

Best:

http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...sey/Camera.png

In the first you might want to add some green. Will help the colors and blend of the text. But ahh pretty good. Clean and attractive.

Second isn't my kind tbh. But put more thought to c4d usage man. Kiu.