Hold On

Tell me what you think.
http://i51.tinypic.com/1z673ue.png

its got nice details on the hand and smoke but there are lines inside the hand which ruin the depth, there is also lighting on the hands but no lightsource, kiu :)

I agree with liquid.

also, its kind of hard to tell whats in the background of the hand.

I like it, the text and all but the hand seems to be over-sharpened.

OK thanks guys :)