2 new tags

its been a while since i made a tag so please be gentle :P
http://schultzdesigns.lostdesigners....5/Sparrow1.png
http://schultzdesigns.lostdesigners....11/05/Rush.png
oh, and i finally learned how to upload my signatures in my blog...
cnc please

I like the first one but it seems a little over-done/messy. I think the downwards flow kinda ruins it aswell and it's a shame because that's an awesome style.
The second one has some nice effects and lighting but there isn't enough attention on the focal.
Good job though, keep it up!

Second one is nice. Bring out the focal and bit more.

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Originally Posted by Derosion

Second one is nice. Bring out the focal and bit more.

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^^ this the first one is too chaotic and doesnt have any real pow like your normal tags

thanks for the comments!
sharpened the 2nd tag a lil more so that it'd pop out
http://schultzdesigns.lostdesigners....1/05/rush2.png
does it look better?

EDIT: oh and i did a little fix on jack sparrow too
http://schultzdesigns.lostdesigners....5/Sparrow2.png

EDIT 2: thanks taylor i'll just redo my sparrow tag to fix the flow :3

I can see that is has been a while..
joke, but like der said bring the focal out a bit more in the seccond that its realy nice :)

thanks gaaf!
i know the potc tag isn't that good so i decided to play around with it a bit more and this is what i got
http://schultzdesigns.lostdesigners....5/Sparrow3.png
me likey this better.. watchu think?

a bit overdone imo D:

awww crap ok im gon change it again

smooth out the side just a bit leave the middle with those funky swirls i think would looks pretty cool . kiu tho