Battle tag, one of my best?

So i got some like's on this one:
http://i53.tinypic.com/nluzwl.png
used it against SF.
any coments? :)

I like the flow but the redness on the top right, the part that was dust like on the left, I was it was more scattered than bunched up, also wish it went more with the flow.

I see thanks manga :)