a couple pieces

hey there i am new, wanted to post some stuff..


http://i854.photobucket.com/albums/a...er/medusa4.png

http://i854.photobucket.com/albums/a.../military6.png

they're too big.. Neither have a really defined focal point because the depth is just limited to the huge amount of negative space.

Pretty cool tags but i would lose the text on both and sharpen the first one around the focal. The light source on the first one looks a little random as well. But overall good job. :)