more anime

trying to get better at this anime thing...
2nd attempt

http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/8626/animefail2.png

3rd attempt

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8899/anime3n.png http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/7...ime3notext.png

3rd attempt was awesome..like the compo..just think it lacks details

2nd
colors are boring, lighting isnt good, no depth, no focal point
3rd
colors are better.. maybe they can be more vibrant, lighting is weak, this style have no depth.. and there are 2 focal points, chick and right upper corner