some thing new im trying

some thing like grunge but with bubbles so yea :)
V1:
http://up352.siz.co.il/up3/nnyzymjezhy2.png
V2:
http://up352.siz.co.il/up1/x5m5ummzwmyy.png
im trying it so plz coments
how is it?

Looks weird IMO.
The Knoll Lighting distracts me from the guys face.
And try to lower the opacity of the bubbles.
Also, take out the square box things.
Grunge works with dark colors.
I don't think blue is one of them.
But, i have to say i like the style.
You can do better :D !

I think the thing I dislike most is the c4ds, bubbles, whatever you used.

They're too uniform and it really looks like you just grabbed a c4d and slapped it on there on lighten or screen. :/

I don't mind the boxes and stuff. I just really don't like the... crap... that seems to be floating around. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme nor reason to it.