Genesis Red Vs Blue - SOTWtag

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Didnt get many votes, i thought it was quite creative this tag took me over 2 and a half hours, pretty long.
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If you got rid of some of the lines and the and the tones a brighter or more full red it'd be better.. but I really like the attempt.. you can make some nice stuff if you try.. that masked tag you made is so superb.

if u changed the tones of dark/blue to create depth it would be better imo

Really nice potential here. If you just get rid of some lines. make the colors a brighter neon and just add some glow, just a lot of lighting effects :]
Keep working on this tay

i dont like those colors on the tag a diffrent blue and red one could of won |:
and work a bit on lightning
kiu its a good concept

Yeah it was definitely a good idea..
but the execution is off
I would have preferred the lines actually being red and maybe not as many outlines

thanks all