Knight

trying something new again

http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/7...ightgrunge.png

bump :/

Not bad.
However, the tag looks quite chaotic with the grunge texture.
You should also emphasize the focal point. Make sure it is the first thing you see when you view the tag.
The tag also lacks on depth.

Overall, not bad. It is always good to experiment. Well done.