Futuristic Warfare

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Too dark + no flow. Lighting is okay.

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Originally Posted by Yakuto

Too dark + no flow. Lighting is okay.

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This.

the darkness gives the compo, atmosphere and depth of the piece, + expresses how the render should be. If the render was placed in all colors and a pixy fairy land it wouldnt look right xD

The composition is off on the tag to begin with, everything is way to dark with dull lighting, the lighting should be much stronger and the piece lacks depth in general the transition from light to dark on the face should also be smoother. The tag in general needs a lot of work.

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Originally Posted by Yakuto

Too dark + no flow. Lighting is meh.

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This

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Originally Posted by Fork

The composition is off on the tag to begin with, everything is way to dark with dull lighting, the lighting should be much stronger and the piece lacks depth in general the transition from light to dark on the face should also be smoother. The tag in general needs a lot of work.

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This x2