Halo tag.

I detected that there is no flow so you don't need to worry about that. CnC is greatly appreciated. :)

http://i54.tinypic.com/x1eufa.png

I like it, but the thing about Monotoned signatures is that they dont really emphasize something, or to be honest anything.
I would recommened trying to implement some colors, Colourful work always stands out.
The font is really to big and kinda distracting.
I like the texture, this would have been better with more colours.
Either way I see what you were trying to do.
7.5/10 :)

-Edit- Try working with Depth, it will make your focal point stand out better, and make your signature more 3d Like.
The piece has potential, I mean.

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Originally Posted by Loroy

I like it, but the thing about Monotoned signatures is that they dont really emphasize something, or to be honest anything.
I would recommened trying to implement some colors, Colourful work always stands out.
The font is really to big and kinda distracting.
I like the texture, this would have been better with more colours.
Either way I see what you were trying to do.
7.5/10 :)

-Edit- Try working with Depth, it will make your focal point stand out better, and make your signature more 3d Like.
The piece has potential, I mean.

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Much appreciation and respect to you for your honesty and initiative to give constructive criticism, quite the best CnC I have received in a long time.

The only reason I slabbed on a gradient map was because there were too many colors, especially with the C4D, effects and backgrounds I have added in.. It will look so bad and out of the scheme of colors, there was blue, red, purple and even green.
If I left the tag with no work on gradients then it'd look worse than this, but I understand your implantation.
Yes, the depth needs a lot of work perhaps a touch of blur and dodge around the render would be splendid,
thanks for your honesty and I will work on it.

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Originally Posted by Misery

Much appreciation and respect to you for your honesty and initiative to give constructive criticism, quite the best CnC I have received in a long time.

The only reason I slabbed on a gradient map was because there were too many colors, especially with the C4D, effects and backgrounds I have added in.. It will look so bad and out of the scheme of colors, there was blue, red, purple and even green.
If I left the tag with no work on gradients then it'd look worse than this, but I understand your implantation.
Yes, the depth needs a lot of work perhaps a touch of blur and dodge around the render would be splendid,
thanks for your honesty and I will work on it.

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No problem bro, If the piece before the Gradient map looked not that good.
Try using 2 Gradient maps, Dark(DarkTurqoise-BorderLineGray) and light(Orange/Vibrant Color), lowering the opacitys to your likeing, then adjust the Exposure in adjustments, should correct some of the color scheme.
I find messing around with adjustments usually adds more of a 'Juicy' colour and style to a piece.