Darkness

Well this is my first time making a tag this dark, what do you think?
http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a...uts/Gundam.png

i like the depth but the colors are wrong i think and maybe lose some those c4ds this c4d whoring stuff doesn't sit that well . but kiu m8 not one of your best for sure but still improvement .

I like the c4ds used.
Think it adds some nice depth and blending
However I do agree with Sirenzo that the colours don't fit so well.
Don't mind the lighting but think it actually will look better a tad darker

Theres room for improvement, I'd change the colours and add a little more lighting.

It needs a better lighting and colors...
And also i didnt liked very much that blur over there... -> near the render
It takes the depth that you want to give to the tag...

Well how should i change the colors in this?

I agree with some of the previous posts

Like your creation of depth, the lighting is also good,

The render I feel is all wrong for the curving style of your c4d, it's so rigid compared to your smooth c4d, I would suggest a new focal, and don't forget about those layers I showed you that can help with changing colour or your focal & c4d work :D

I would also add a layer of vib to this K, just to make it seem a little more sharper.

Good stuff bro ^^

Edit: I just saw your post above mine,

Levels helps with the shadowing and the darkening of colour, hue/sat is an easy man trick, you can also try selective colour and play around with a few of those layers as well as believe it or not photo filter can greatly help meld it all together :)

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Originally Posted by Slave

I agree with some of the previous posts

Like your creation of depth, the lighting is also good,

The render I feel is all wrong for the curving style of your c4d, it's so rigid compared to your smooth c4d, I would suggest a new focal, and don't forget about those layers I showed you that can help with changing colour or your focal & c4d work :D

I would also add a layer of vib to this K, just to make it seem a little more sharper.

Good stuff bro ^^

Edit: I just saw your post above mine,

Levels helps with the shadowing and the darkening of colour, hue/sat is an easy man trick, you can also try selective colour and play around with a few of those layers as well as believe it or not photo filter can greatly help meld it all together :)

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Thanks slave :D

cute, needs more tones imho.