Zilean siggy

had time to spare when was forced into my basement for a tornado warning
http://sadpanda.us/images/534598-MX9HP4L.png

Really cool, just make your clip mask border thing a little smaller on the right side, but other than that, its really cool, great depth, im loving this :D

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Originally Posted by +SF.ColdDegree

had time to spare when was forced into my basement for a tornado warning
http://sadpanda.us/images/534598-MX9HP4L.png

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first off that duplicate needs to go. Doesn't suit the signature and severely disrupts any attempted flow. It also looks very cut and doesn't blend in very well.

Colours look pretty washed out imo, too pale. Try get some more vibrant colours.
That green c4d on the left looks 'awkward.' I don't think it suits the colour scheme and it being really the only green it just stands out way too much and doesn't blend.
After you get rid of the dupe I'd start to burn and dodge a bit more to get some better lighting. Speaking of lighting just to the right of the focal's head, there is a very bright and strong light. Try to tone that down because it is far too strong IMO
Blending of the render looks pretty sweet and the only problem I see is those circles.

KIU

OK I HAD A BIG BIO FOR U AND MY COMPUTER WIPED IT ALL OUT ON ME AS I WAS TYPING IT SO HERE GOES AGAIN oops sry caps m8 . any ways what i like about this tag is the colors and the concept of it .

what i think can be fixed ;
i would try removing some of your effects from the focal face and body you had too much on it , also try and stay on your flow.

how to fix your flow
http://screensnapr.com/-/uploads/xJ1ojq.png

how to fix the messiness of your tag
i would try looking through all your layers shutting off the eye and once found the layer effects that making it so messy like covering your focal s face and too much of the body i would erase some of those effects and try to stay on flow of your tag with the effects .
http://screensnapr.com/-/uploads/NZoWVr.png

hope this helps best of luck m8 :)

^ Adding onto that. Like I said in my CnC
The circles interrupt the flow a lot and is even shown in Enzo's diagramm. Even though he didn't mention them :P