Anime/Abstract Sig CNC

kk so I posted this earlier:
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...cBlueSpace.png

well someone said that looks like a cool background or w/e:
so i made a sig out of it:

http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...AnimeSpace.png

CNC?

i told you m8 your other one looked better just had to work on your flow on the right side so instead of trying to fix the right side u flipped the render focal on to that side and said well how about now ? well its not good man. you lost all your flow now and lighting looks wrong i would try and go back to where you last had it before and just work on the right side. i told you a few different ways of doing it . tonight later when you're on we will use the TV again and fix this issue with you, but i think with out me doing this , i know you can fix it your self you know what you are doing now. So please try again and then re- post what you have before hand, then work on blending in your focal with some gradients and maybe some effects . we will also have to re- work on your depth . k cya later best of luck on v2 or even a v3 .

alright Sirenzo I trust what you say now xD cuz the other thing looked wrong nomatter how i did it. So i'm gonna try to fix the flow