Be or not to be

IMO, looks unfinished. I'd slap some fractals on that bitch, and the brownish light spots by the lower right side of the render look like you put too much color in to them. Many spots don't blend with the tag's color scheme. Lacks depth. Also, you should try to bring out blue in the entire piece, to go along with the gold. I saw you tried incorporating this in the lower left side of the render.

Now for the good stuff: I like the idea of it, and it really doesn't look as messy as it should, if you know what I mean. Composition isn't bad. This tag has great potential, but you should work on it some more.