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You need to work on that focal and lighting :S
very cool . only issuse i have with it is it bright as hell tone it down a bit and it should be fine
Brightness is a bit much, and I think as a result your render's cut came out a bit choppy. Tone down the brightness and it'll fix that problem most likely. I actually like the text here, but I don't like the placement. Keep it up. :)
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nice work ..,
The Nick Isnt So Good ,
And need To Work About Depth.
bottom of her face is really bright, maybe burn it a bit to tone it down
