Halo Siggy

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...tm-d3kjkyy.png
outcome of my video tutorial...will be posted soon !

Nice.. ;)

I think ur render is too cluttered and covered imo. Also the sides look way too bland.

Work on spacing your effects better across ur tag. Lighting and depth also need alot of work. Cant read the text so id just leave it out

its abit busy around the focal cant really make out what it is to clearly and the text ist a great choice of font imo