new...craptacula

seen this kinda style but meh my attempt fails lol

http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/...GFX/mohbwG.png
http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/...thedarkbwg.png

Too dark.. :$

cant see sh*t

i know what your going for and you have a good idea of it on v2
keep going but work on your lighting , keep shadows and illumination in mind ,
and try not to over saturate the sig

thanks man ill work on those points in the next one

its really dark... but I like the idea too... I prefer v2 but think the colors need more blending :) good job :)