Tagger

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Well this is my first tag using a real stock not an anime etc. Give me an honest opinion please and thank you!

u overcontrasted the focal, its to sharp, and solours are bit to bright, tho lightening is nice, but u should burn some stuff around the focal for more depth,
Also try to blurr some spots in bg, to create depth,
text is neat, and efects are intresting ;) keep it up, real life stocks are better to work with, harder, but better looking!