http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...tm-d3l26an.png
tis was for SOTW at another site.
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http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...tm-d3l26an.png
tis was for SOTW at another site.
I dislike the colouring, the spot of green and pink seems very out of place..
The depth is okay. could be worked on with dodge and burn. Blur + sharpen,.
You have too many light sources that arent reflected in your render.
I'd move the girl to the left more, she seems too far to the right.
• Add more colours in there rather than the spots, they dont work..
• Determine a main light source and work from that
• Adjust the composition
Its okay, but has potential to be better.
I do have a colored version...thought this weeks theme for SOTW was make last layer BnW...and add some kind of color lol XD
