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http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...e9-d3nd9to.png


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Looks like some hardbrush smudging am I right? I think the top half of the smudge looks very nice, the lower part doesn't. The top part has some nice depth too it cos of the diff. colors and such, the lower just looks flat with all that grey. Make the lower like the top smudge and it'll look fine imo.

The bokehs look kinda randomly placed tbh, i'd just remove them altogether. I do like the effects around the dude, altough some of the parts around his leg look to obv. soft-brush-erased (lol what word ^^) imo.

With a few fixes this could be rly nice I think! kiu

the only part that really bugs me is the way the lower part of the grass looks, other than that I like it ;D

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Originally Posted by .Stuuuuu

Looks like some hardbrush smudging am I right? I think the top half of the smudge looks very nice, the lower part doesn't. The top part has some nice depth too it cos of the diff. colors and such, the lower just looks flat with all that grey. Make the lower like the top smudge and it'll look fine imo.

The bokehs look kinda randomly placed tbh, i'd just remove them altogether. I do like the effects around the dude, altough some of the parts around his leg look to obv. soft-brush-erased (lol what word ^^) imo.

With a few fixes this could be rly nice I think! kiu

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maybe you want to finish this ? pm me if you want

Everything looks good, the style of the tag again is a vision.

I would just tell you to clean up or color the bottom smudge strokes because they don't blend at all with the picture and reduce your color flare circles because they kill the focal.

exclusive:
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...e9-d3nd9to.png

Stuuuuu:
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6974/excstu.png

http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/2478/stuexc.png

Black cos I hate white bg's.



didn't add text cos I didn't think it fit. I'll send you my psd soon ex.

Ofc. u could add text if u feel like it.

- edit - added your tag to my post for comparison

I like the brighter atmosphere more.

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...e9-d3nvp71.png

Sweeeeeeet touch ups there ex!

Loving it :D

Anyone wanna CnC this?

this thread is just awesome... love the final product!! great work