Thalass,an abstract

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...xx-d3nl7b3.png

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http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/848/thalass.png
I know it looks monotone,but i was trying to make it look like an "under water shark attack" not literally of course cuz it is an abstract and Thalass means sea.
and it's been a month,i was on vacation and been trying to produce dubstep.

Hehe, you should name your next tag "Excuses, bro".

But looks good, the bright smudge spots look a tad bit distracting from the name though. Otherwise your concept was good and execution was too.

I'd suggest not leaving so much negative space next time (Black)

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Originally Posted by Syn

Hehe, you should name your next tag "Excuses, bro".

But looks good, the bright smudge spots look a tad bit distracting from the name though. Otherwise your concept was good and execution was too.

I'd suggest not leaving so much negative space next time (Black)

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So i should change the canvas size

Crop the back with the cropping tool

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Originally Posted by Syn

Crop the back with the cropping tool

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What would you mean by "The Back"?

http://s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/p...gif?1300194316

I like it, but why is it so blurred?

Text and effects around the text are quite nice, but I agree that it looks over-blurred.

There is is also way to much blackness on the sides, and even if your going for a monotone tag, you can still use different tones of red to make it a bit more appealing to the eye.

add yellow and white sparks to liven up the colors!!

I kinda get what you're saying,but i don't.So anyone wanna collab onto it?
And a 1 star rating :| Why does everyone hate me?