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Setting please .Awesome
I think this needs some more detail in the smudging.
What i mean by that is more darker/diff. colored spots and then esp. in that grey area right on front of her face.
I'd also give the face a bit more contrast/vibrance to make it pop out more.
Needs a better lightsource then the red blob on her hair. Also, it kinda looks like everything is at the same level of sharpness
except some of the smudging coming from her shoulder looks more sharp, add a bit of sharpness to some of the more detailed smudging i was talkin about in front of her.
Oh and try not to center your focal too much. kiu
i agree with above... I think she needs a good light source and more contrast btwn shades... bust out the ol dodge and burn and play with adding some more variations to ur pinks and blacks to give more depth... love the stock... and love what u have so far!!
the flow needs work. This is a render is looking to the left. The flow does not fit this render at all.
Colored borders are not my thing. Best is a black border.
The smudging in itself is not bad, just doesn't fit the render in this directions...
what stu said ;)
I like it overall KIU
Very nice smudging! I think you need to sharpen the whole thing a bit more though and you see the sort of fold that is behind her neck and head? If you darken that it will look like the smudge is behind and beside her instead of just looking like she is on top of smudgy wallpaper. Nice one =)
