Gaaf & .Stuuu Collab

My start:
http://i52.tinypic.com/15o8eol.png

Stuu's changes and smudge:
http://i54.tinypic.com/x4lq94.png

My finish:
http://i55.tinypic.com/2gtrynp.png Seee the white tooth wr lol

CnC all tha way

the reflection on the glasses does not match up with the bg in the sig, the glasses and earing would need to be whiter to match teeth white. good job gaaf, it's composed well a little bit of a fhs, but it works with the flow. ;)

Im sorry but i really dont like it.
The smudging and the sharpened background makes me feel a bit ill lol.
The lighting also doesnt match the lighting on the render... notice the light on her neck and ear... you need a light source on that side ;)

thnx for the tips guys, I will work on those points when I get home this afternoon :)

a like it i mean its a great start for you too this yours and gaaf first collab ? would like to see more collabs from u 2 in the near future .
the color choicses are pretty good m8 's and the texturs is ok but i think it still missing somthing else from it not sure exactly what but something just looks like is missing from this tag um i think if maybe you guys tried to put a new reflection in her glasses to mach your bg would of made the tag a bit stronger gl again you 2 on maybe a new collab in future :)

Thanks for the feedback guys :)

Yeh this is our first collab siren, and my 3rd ever collab lol xD

I'd love to do more collabs in the future.

I just tried ur idea with the reflection in the glasses, but i think i kinda failed rly hard xD

Also tried to fix the lightin issue a bit. Totally forgot about the whiteness of the glasses nd stuff.. but it's friday and im off! lol

http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/1612/blehgs.png

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/883/blehhsg.png

it dosnt realy reflect AS IT SHOULD BUT WAS A GOOD ATTEMPT M8 I WOULD KEEP TRYING WITH MAYBE A NEW TAG TO PRACTICE WITH REFLECTION TO oops sry caps was turned on . keep up the good work tho m8s u too work good together.

Yeh its rly fkn hard gettin the perspective right with this reflection thing :/