Galactica

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Cinema 4d + PS

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its missing lighting , that would make it look sweet :D

Your c4ds are too smooth.. roughen them up a bit and add some texture.

The top looks too geometric... there's a straight line which just doesn't occur naturally like that. I agree with the previous points about better lighting and sharpening up the c4d.

since it looks like it is a heat from within, maybe make some light strays coming from it dissapearing in space... as if it is leaking light...
looks good man gj!!