corrupter

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2879/corrupter.jpg
so this is a corrupter from sc2 if prob look s like a blob of shit if u dont recognize it :) cnc

Looks like some line's to me now :P
try to finish it and add some color's im sure it will look great :)

http://www.desura.com/members/darth-...2-concept-art3

Just like in the baneling image, if you're only redrawing certain lines and not focusing on the main elements then it looks like a mess. (I main zerg and I couldn't recognize it).

In this sketch you haven't defined the main body/head with thick, clear, connecting lines.
In the baneling sketch the head wasn't clear to me either.

I think varying brush thickness may help achieve that. KIU.