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i love this style and colors and text and effects the only suggestion i have is to get rid of the second focal thing... the one behind because it is taking from ur compo and and overall appeal. GJ
If u put the renders 2 time, u need to blur the one in hes back, it looks weird like its now. But i like it!
Tbh I don't like it. Second focal looks messy and it's just a bunch of clip masking :F I don't really like the text, seems the opacity was set down. Also boring colors tbh. I'd try adding in some more vibrant colors and something other than clip masking.
The 2nd focal thing is throwing me off, as my eye goes directly to it allmost. Try adding like a motion blur to the 2nd focal and turn the opacity down. On the motion blur put the angle to flow with your tag and it may turn out okay. If that doesn't work just either add a blur to it or just get rid of the second focal all together.
