v2-- over contrasted in places I know... but the damage was done when I added certain layers... and its not really worth the redo... plan on continuing to work on this style tho :)
You gotta burn dodge this mate. A lot of the lighting makes no sense. A lot of places look messy/crowded. I see a bit of LQ issues. Overall design seems a bit poorly executed. Your colors are really bland, guessing you used a gradient map. I don't like this tbh.
But regardless, KIU mate.
07-22-2011, 05:18 AM
ascheb
please i am all for ur cnc but dont bother tackin kiu on the end of ur comments... i did use a gradient and it probably killed the tags depth... I do see a purpose to the lighting tho :/ thanks for cnc much appreciated.
07-22-2011, 05:28 AM
Speechless
Well, i think that the render needs to be up with 5-10pixels, so you cut out hes head a little.
From the forum i came there are some guys that using this style, i can say that ur is not colored good yet, u need to give life to the tag by colors.
I can give u a tutorial about colors, if u want, just pm me.
U need a source for the white light.
07-22-2011, 05:32 AM
ascheb
Ok v2 Updated... Tried to restore the depth by returning to the original colors and adding some dodge and burn and few bits and pieces--
oh hey u musta commented at the same time as me speechless... thanks... I still feel the color is wee mono :( but meh... time to rest from this sig for now! LOL... and tuts are always great... I have a collection so any u would send me feel free :D
07-22-2011, 06:26 AM
Manga
Lighting still needs work and this is really contrasted :E
Colors are still a bit boring. Tbh I'd scrap this and try again on another signature.