need some expert advise

ehhh -.-" im not good at this style.... need some expert advise.
this all from scratch

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...ca-d41cy8r.png

cnc squad... hop on dis bitty

Colors are too solid, not enough blending. I would say tone down the brightness of the colors but don't dull then up. The white is way too distracting, maybe add some of the colors in the back to the front? Gl.

its really blurry and one of the things that makes smudge tags and abstract tags so look good is that they are so full of detail... but with the blur there is no detail. I would work with some more smudging and some color adjustments and curve layers to bring back the depth and detail in ur smudge :D also work with toning the contrast of the white down just a little-- keep workin at it :) I like the colors :)

thanks for the useful comments guys :) its my 1st abstract so i need to grab ideas ^^

its nice to see u tryin something different mecca ! :) and good to have u here :D