Cool smudge, perhaps expand upon it a bit more so that the left isn't as empty.
As for the vert, the light is a bit too strong imo and I don't like rebecca black as a focal.
07-25-2011, 06:31 AM
ascheb
lol thats Justin Bieber... but thanks :) appreciate CnC ^_^
07-25-2011, 06:58 AM
Manga
Vert one is good, horizontal one looks ew in a few places. I'd suggest cropping the vert one a bit and adding more effects.
07-25-2011, 08:31 AM
Lewk
Do the same thing in the vert.. a little different though.. and darker. make a background for it.
07-25-2011, 08:57 AM
Speechless
Nice flow but jb sucks
07-25-2011, 03:48 PM
ascheb
Thanks everyone for comments-- LOL Justin Bieber isnt too bad... he can actually sing and play like 5 instruments... i will admit he is a bit of a show boat tho :/ I dno i dont listen to his music but the render worked LOL
And Lewk... im sorry im having a hard time understanding what you mean... do you mean just continue the smudge to fill in the empty space?
07-25-2011, 05:50 PM
Lewk
Yeah basically.. do the same to fill the emptiness