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CnC? :D
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Smudging is a bit rough but it looks okay.
On the left it looks like the lightning suddenly stops as if it's the end of the render, if that's the case erase that part.
Would be better without the text, I like the colours used though, keep it up!
I like it very much but for the size maybe you should have use 400x150
But anyway great job ^^
maybe a different font, and possibly a way to make the text blend a bit more so it doesn't stick out like a sore thumb. other than that it's alright.
Meh, i never know what to do with text... :/ Always bad