Lethal Bizzle

V1.http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7...thalbizzle.jpg
V2. http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/1...albizzlev2.jpg
V3. http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6...albizzlev3.jpg
C&C would be greatly appreciated please.

It's pretty dark and lighting could really use work. It feels unfinished and what you did with those two strips should be expanded aswell as put more focus on the render. The sig could be composed of those strips as effects. The background doesn't really go on the render. Kiu though you have an idea how to photoshop now just add onto that by learning new techniques.

Updated two edits.