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floating head syndrome, you have it
try showing a bit more of your render/stock next time man
also try and avoid center-focals as they tend to destroy your composition a majority of the time
the piece could use some more vibrant colors and the text doesnt blend very well
just read up on some tuts that highlight on some of the points ive stated and youll be alright :3
Yeah it was stock that i experimented this time but it was my first time using stock :D ok ty for your advice .