Vision tagg

I'd like some cnc on this:

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/5139/visiona.png

I think there are to many different things going on in this tag. You have totally different feel on left and right side, as well as different flows. The lines on his cheek are distracting. I'd go for the flow and the kind of effect you did on the left side!!

Agree with Xelo, flow is off. B/W sigs are IMO really tough to pull off so I'd avoid them unless you've made something you think is really amazing.