First Vector

http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7992/firstvector.png


http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...xx-d46vj53.png

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...xx-d46yhsp.png

Any advice?

The colors and tones of the fish don't blend that well. The stuff on the "dirty" text could be executed better.

Add more values.

looks like a child drawing to me.......
sorry for being blunt....

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Originally Posted by Lewk

Add more values.

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I'm guessing that means details?

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Originally Posted by Fork

The colors and tones of the fish don't blend that well. The stuff on the "dirty" text could be executed better.

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Indeed

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Originally Posted by Xelo

looks like a child drawing to me.......
sorry for being blunt....

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That's because it be "mah first vector"

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