New Sig

http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/...Gfx/idunno.png

Think you posted this in the wrong section.

Anyways, the colours look kinda dull to me, text is too distractive and i think you've placed your focal a tad to far to the right. Lighting needs work too. Also can't rly see a flow going on. I do like the majority of the effects, it just seems kinda messy to me tbh.

That was where i was aiming for :3

Sharpen, blurring, burning, dodging ;D

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Originally Posted by Hadouken

That was where i was aiming for :3

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You were aiming for what? No flow and lighting?

Guess you succeeded..

I was aiming for that dirty C4D trash style...
A sig doesnt always have to have perfect flow and lightning...
There are a lot of good artworks without it.

Well to each their own I guess.. but I still stand by my points; this just looks flat and messy in my eyes.

What about my newest?

http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/...Gfx/DuesEx.png

Much better imo, looks quite appealing cos it has a very nice atmo. Don't know about the big vertical clipmask in front of everything tho tbh.