Henderson

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CnC.

I like it but the focal needs blended in!

Yeah I have a problem with non-subtle blending. :(

Need to work on your effects, text, colors, and blending. The render looks too pasted. There aren't many effects so it seems really empty. The colors are boring and monotone. I'd add in different shades and colors to help that. Work with the lighting and create some contrast on the tag. I'd remove the text.

Read some tutorials and you'll improve a lot I'm sure. Kiu mate!

its got a weird feel to it man i like it but he needs to be blended or something and the mono tone is killin me lol

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Originally Posted by +ta.Oath

its got a weird feel to it man i like it but he needs to be blended or something and the mono tone is killin me lol

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this and needs to work on the effects a bit more and your lighting is way off.
try going back into this tag and look for the layer with your lighting and re work it so that the light source is more in back and not so much in front . and would try blending in the focal more to .

A few things.

1: I sort of can't remove the text, it has to be there.

2: As I've said, I'm really bad at blending. Either it looks really overblended to me or it looks underblended, and the underblending looks better to me.

3: I don't really care about this tag much anymore, it already got graded in the league I made for lol. But it's been a long while since I've received a perfect 6 from either grader on my works. :\ I'm also having a problem with my colors being too monotone lately. Need to get out of this rut.