Sasuke SS Entry.

Throw away-
http://i55.tinypic.com/346npys.png

Entry-
http://i53.tinypic.com/149s64w.jpg

C&C Please. :D

Diggin it, received my vote, I like the throw away even better but a bit too bright in the center in my opinion.

The throw away was better imo!

Throw away was worse in my opinion
your entry was quite nice, it got my vote :]

Your throw away had messed up quality and effects. I'd remove the text and not blur them.

Second is boring and empty, looks like a wip, background + render tbh,

Thanks everyone.

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Originally Posted by Manga

Your throw away had messed up quality and effects. I'd remove the text and not blur them.

Second is boring and empty, looks like a wip, background + render tbh,

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Actually its a lot more then that but don't want to get into it because this is a C&C.
Thanks for the advice even though it wasn't really any advice :P

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Originally Posted by Agato

Thanks everyone.

Actually its a lot more then that but don't want to get into it because this is a C&C.
Thanks for the advice even though it wasn't really any advice :P

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That makes no sense but K

i love the "electricity" effects in both, i liked the 2nd one more and it got my vote ;] and 1st one would also, i think u have great potencial, even u were away for so long u still have the level of a pro xD and ur work adores most of the void, so know what? HIGH FIVE!