v1.This is with too much topaz :S
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4491/venuti1.png
v2.
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5821/venuti2.png
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v1.This is with too much topaz :S
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4491/venuti1.png
v2.
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5821/venuti2.png
The main problem here is your colors. Let's forget about everything else and talk about the colors.
A monotone color scheme has it's up and downs at times, but here it isn't working. The fact that this whole tag consists of one shade is really a factor that is bringing down the appeal.
I'd avoid doing this.
Also the lighting is very dull in this piece mainly due to the monochromatic color scheme. The light orbs you have there are very dulled out. If you have a chance you can look at my GOW tutorial which I made that can help you with C4D and lighting orbs.
It's right here
Otherwise, it has potential and the C4D work isn't bad. Kiu man!
mucho better!!! great improvement!
the colors is great but now your lacking in depth and i think v 2 is best on the color choices imo .
Ty Derosion you help me.
Ty Xelo and Sirenzo
Colors are too monotone and boring.
