4 tags c&c please.

(please tell me what you think)

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...99-d4a01ue.png

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/2165/nred.png
By newtimes at 2011-09-14

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9711/wonderwomanf.png
By newtimes at 2011-09-14

http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/1663/unnamedtag.png
By newtimes at 2011-

Hmm, I like the last one the most, but lets cnc them all :p

1st:
Doesn't look that bad, but it seems unfinished. you've got things like focal done, but it just need some standing out effects (I''d reccomend fractals, or a light orb with soft brush)

2end:

Looks simple, yet nice. the flow is good, but I feel there should be more going on in the background. maybe try closing her/him in with some c4d's?

3d:

The right part looks really good, but the left part looks washed out. fix the left part, and you've got a really nice tagg bro ;)

4th

I like this one, I don't really have remarks, other than it doesn't have text ;)

you've got nice pieces there, but some just need a little more work ;)

1st kinda looks messy with the smudge nd txt doesnt seem to go good with it

2nd seems to plain

3rd its good the render seems a lil off from the rest of the sig, like it blends but it doesnt

4th seems pretty good, lighting flow nd depth, think the sharp on the render could be down jst a lil bit tho

kiu :p

thanks !

#1 her arms are too blended.
#2 Cliché and the flow is too straight.
#3 very empty left side
#4 its too dark

Im gonna comment on the last one becouse that one has the most potential.
Its good but to dark, try to be creative with your render placement. Also the space stoch u placed on her looks lq and to blurry, might wanna fix that :)
Lightning is pritty good :), keep it up man

ok,

thanks ! :D

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Originally Posted by Gaaf

Im gonna comment on the last one because that one has the most potential.
Its good but to dark, try to be creative with your render placement. Also the space stock u placed on her looks lq and to blurry, might wanna fix that :)
Lightning is pretty good :), keep it up man

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agree with gaaf on this the othe2 look unfinished . the last one cought my eye the most looks like u had a great start but u gave up on it like throw in a few c4ds on top and called it good well now you need work on the lighting of this tag and maybe toss in some gradients for color gl m8 .

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Originally Posted by sirenzo

agree with gaaf on this the othe2 look unfinished . the last one cought my eye the most looks like u had a great start but u gave up on it like throw in a few c4ds on top and called it good well now you need work on the lighting of this tag and maybe toss in some gradients for color gl m8 .

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thanks :D