Samurai

Please

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1426/samuraion.jpg

That's sad to see no comments.

I find it dificult to recognise what the focal is supposed to be as I've not seen the render/stock used before.
It's got a nice vibe though and the text looks great though it seems to be grabbing my attention a bit.

hmm, it's very nice, but a little dark... i'd say try to use curves, but i'm not sure, cause it might cause you to lose the atmo, which is very nice right now ;)

also, you did a good job with the text ;)

I cant see bugger all with it, but that might be due to my screeen. So id adjust contrast brightness etc.

I had to enlarge it a few times to get a good look at it..... nice as said above, but the white line around the edge off the face should go imo.

Oh. Those words were quite nice. Thank you guys.

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but the white line around the edge off the face should go imo.

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I've tried to do it, but if I remove the white line there, the focal blend too much and it gets too hard to see what it is.

And yes. Maybe it's quite too dark, but it don't look that cool for me if I make it lighter.
Thanks again.