Return ~ Equinery -> Shadowector

Long Hiatus, long story. I recently got some motivation to do some sig work, though I need to learn a lot still.. x.x"
I don't think I can go back to Club Claro for no response to e-mail. I do congratulate the new members on Club Claro ^^
Well, long story short, I made a comeback sig. This is... not really the best i wanted to do, though I'm still learning and will climb on the bandwagon soon to improve.
At last, I may go back to rendering soon =)
Well here is my comeback sig, feel free to criticize, bash, and praise =). I need all the feedback I need so I can improve. Still waiting to buy a tablet =x


http://i52.tinypic.com/2ebr49w.png

Lighting is still an issue for atm, prob what it is needed to improve this piece. ~

Welcome back Shadow, we always have a spot open for you at the team so I don't know what you mean by the no mail response?

welcome back man and its a decent tag looks unfinished to me tho keep workin on it man

Well the biggest flaw I see is her hair is just cut off because this was a render that didn't have all the hair in the picture :P

Also the bg doesn't seem to fit so well, kind of empty.

My biggest suggestion would be to either hide the missing part of hair with some kinda effect like foreground or to actually draw in the hair yourself so it doesn't look half done. About
the bg, I would suggest to switch the stock and or to add in more pop and flash robotic effects that would match her gear.

Welcome back to Void SV ^^

Thanks for the replies ^^ Ya I didn't really add text or finish the outside effects yet. Got a new laptop and busy moving all resources to this laptop. Ill re-edit this piece and add more WOW factor to it. About the no-mail response, lets forget about it =P

Sry for double post. ~ Update on sig
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/42/unixw.png/