Carmela

i already know a couple things are off in this one but im not going to post what exactly is off for obvious reason.

i enjoy cnc. gimmie your best.

http://i53.tinypic.com/505s8m.png

V2

http://i51.tinypic.com/k2fud3.png

I'd suggest reading some tuts. V2 is actually worse imo.

thanks for the post; anychance you could point me in the direction of large art tuts?

There's too much brightness included on the second version so I have to agree with Provided. Overall it's a good attempt at digital arts, well done. You should consider making a version three if you ever get round to following some graphical tutorials.