Well, first step again. My outcome from Rachet`s Starlight tutorial.
CnC would be nice please. :)
http://i55.tinypic.com/2qsb589.jpg
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Well, first step again. My outcome from Rachet`s Starlight tutorial.
CnC would be nice please. :)
http://i55.tinypic.com/2qsb589.jpg
Not bad, I like the flow, the text is a bit misplaced and there's no actual background. Add a texture or a few suitable c4ds to make the background more exciting, but not too much to take away the focal (the render).
What did you do to your focal? Seems so sharp ....... as in you sharpened it, a lot.
And the effects on him are weird.
Like josho said the flow is great, makes you look at all of the sig and the text last so that seemed great but yeh round his right hand looks way over sharpened.